Gift from the heavens
strokes of colour in grey skies
refractions of light
replace worries with wonder
awaken the child within.
Β© Manivillie Kanagasabapathy
AN: Lucky to have seen a rainbow today while driving home. Felt very blessed that I decided to try a new style, Tanka. Rainbows always make me feel special as if the world stops still and it is me and the miracle.
I don’t know a lot about Tanka poetry, came upon the style by accident and have been wanting to try it ever since. I hope you all like it, and the pivot sentence (3rd sentence) is correct. Tanka poems are not supposed to have titles unless it is a string but added it for my reference.
Any feedback is always welcome.
Thank you
I’m not familiar with this style, but the poem sounds amazing. I’ll have to learn more about the style.
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I like Haiku and came across this style while learning more about them. The link in the Author’s Note (AN) was one of the best “how-to” I have come across. I am excited to keep experimenting with this style.
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